Front cover: Really love the front cover I feel the image is of great quality and really suits the genre of the magazine in which you have chosen to do.
Contents page: I think the image really stands out well on the black background, the only thing I would suggest for an improvement would be to fill more of the black space which I am sure you are going to do anyway.
Double page spread: I think the heading of the page is a really good font and the text looks really good, I think when you have finished the page it will look really look.
Over all I think you magazine is coming on really well :) x
Magazine cover: really like what you've done so far, think it suits your music genre and my favorite parts are the layout, fonts, colour combination and the building image as they fit in well together.
Contents page: I think if you have done with it then it'll be a great contents page, like the fact you've put your chosen model in with the photograph of the graffiti wall. One bad thing is if you can't move the "Contents" text away from the white of the picture then just simply change the colour to a brown or a light pink or light blue or orange.
Double page spread: it looks really good, love the top white box that says "FROM THE STREETS" because the colour selection , font and size is perfect for the top part of the right page. You just need to fill in the blank spaces of the left page around your chosen model.
The magazine seems like a very unique one, it would be great to read something taht is more realted to worldly issues than celeb gossip.
The image is great as it reflects the genre taht you hav echosen. But, it would be better if you brightened up the picture a little. Also, you might want to think abouit having your own background as it woudl make the magazine stand out more.
The font style of the magazine name should be more bold. The name is great as it sounds interesting, uniqe and very bold. Well done
The layout is one which is very different from the rest and so is brilliant.
Front cover:
ReplyDeleteReally love the front cover I feel the image is of great quality and really suits the genre of the magazine in which you have chosen to do.
Contents page:
I think the image really stands out well on the black background, the only thing I would suggest for an improvement would be to fill more of the black space which I am sure you are going to do anyway.
Double page spread:
I think the heading of the page is a really good font and the text looks really good, I think when you have finished the page it will look really look.
Over all I think you magazine is coming on really well :) x
Magazine cover: really like what you've done so far, think it suits your music genre and my favorite parts are the layout, fonts, colour combination and the building image as they fit in well together.
ReplyDeleteContents page: I think if you have done with it then it'll be a great contents page, like the fact you've put your chosen model in with the photograph of the graffiti wall. One bad thing is if you can't move the "Contents" text away from the white of the picture then just simply change the colour to a brown or a light pink or light blue or orange.
Double page spread: it looks really good, love the top white box that says "FROM THE STREETS" because the colour selection , font and size is perfect for the top part of the right page. You just need to fill in the blank spaces of the left page around your chosen model.
So far everything looks awesome =]
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ReplyDeleteThe magazine seems like a very unique one, it would be great to read something taht is more realted to worldly issues than celeb gossip.
ReplyDeleteThe image is great as it reflects the genre taht you hav echosen. But, it would be better if you brightened up the picture a little. Also, you might want to think abouit having your own background as it woudl make the magazine stand out more.
The font style of the magazine name should be more bold. The name is great as it sounds interesting, uniqe and very bold. Well done
The layout is one which is very different from the rest and so is brilliant.